Do being a celebrity come with more advantages or disadvantages. Give relevant examples.
Being a celebrity like movie star or football legend, comes with its advantages and disadvantages, but I opine that being an important person bring more pros.
To start with, being a celebrity is an opportunity, that not everyone has, so it definitely has more merits. Firstly, as a celebrity one enjoy being famous and that means one gets VIP treatments anywhere the person goes. Take for instance, when they apply for visa at any embassy in their country, they stand a very good chance of being given the visa without all the associated formalities and scrutinises that normal people will undergo. In addition, many companies hire them to take part in adverts to promote their images, because the celebrity figure in the advert will make it attractive.
In addition, celebrities are usually wealthy and could afford most comforts their status brings. Their kids, attend the best schools both at home and abroad, they wear designer apparel, live in beautiful homes and ride posh cars. Aside living a luxurious lifestyles, they also enjoy huge fans following, which make them even more popular and richer. For instance, a popular movie star with huge fans tends to get more movie roles because movie producers and promoters will always give them roles and that further enrich them
Although, being a celebrity comes with the problem of privacy invasion and unnecessary stalking coupled with evil gossips about them by jealous people, the advantages of being a star is far more than the disadvantages.
To conclude, being a celebrity is a good thing not shying away from the fact that it comes with its demerits, however in my opinion, the merits of popularity and living a life of affluence far out-weighs the cons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lifestyle'?
Suggestion: lifestyle
...ide posh cars. Aside living a luxurious lifestyles, they also enjoy huge fans following, w...
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Line 5, column 525, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... them roles and that further enrich them Although, being a celebrity comes with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02090592334 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56188326848 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3957844393 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.1 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321249485228 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122461042268 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116379001153 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21437418287 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11504567555 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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