Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
International music that we hear these days should replace traditional musics of different countries.
international music has created a sensation in today's world and is on everyone's mind. people in this generation are in awe of the fast beat music but should it replace traditional style of music of different countries. I will be elaborating this further ahead.
Nowadays everyone likes a fast paced and upbeat type of music. artists like Justin Bieber, Rihanna, Taylor Swift just to name a few have become everyone's idols in terms of international music. Children loves to watch them live performing and even started to belief that there singing and music knowledge is far ahead of the pop culture and traditional music and they prefer these artists over classical singers of different countries any day. As they think that the international music is the future of this sound industry.
if I may recall not everyone still have fallen in love with international music as people of earlier generation whom we call as boomers are still in love with the old school cultural music. they still consider old artists as the people who get music in this world to be popular and still think old classical and jazz music being more melodious than this international rant. traditional music is still being present to this day whereas international music just keeps on loosing its touch every single month with a new album every week.
To close this all I can say music is a way to keep people connected and should reach their souls. it does not matter whether it is an old school traditional or classical music or the international one. every genre of music should be respected in their own way and should be given their own credit. if traditional music is an old wine then international music is the new flavour of whiskey. both different but both effective and necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85148514851 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65478679146 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518151815182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9076222194 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361744254731 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137107906542 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726732443541 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243084100025 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00935625467137 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.