It is undeniable fact that candidates are often questioned with personal data such as marital status, favorite pastime etc. Most of the resumes carries these information at the end including some of the key data like Passport number, Visa Status, Languages known and personal interests. In my opinion, these are needed for few of the jobs which involve overseas work whereas other job doesn’t require these details. The essay will discuss both sides of the opinion with relevant examples.
Most of the jobs in Information Technology expect employees to travel abroad either in short term or in long term. With this background, it is vital for employers to ask details like passport number and status of the visa. The number of associates residing in United States in one of the India’s largest MNC Infosys is an example for the above statement. The organization will plan their strategy according to the people who are willing to travel for project purposes. This clearly shows how getting information on their previous travel experience and languages will help employers as well as employees are mutually benefited.
On the contrary, it is advisable to abstract these details till the final round of interview process. These personal details tend to be misused by the interviewer or any others in the organization without any concern from the person. Also, the marital status is completely personal and it doesn’t have any impact in the job search. For instance, when a person is still single at the age of 35, the chances are there for an interviewer to ask for a reason which may subsequently offend the interview candidate. There is no value added by adding these kind of details in the resume before the end of the interview.
To sum up, the key facts like passport details, marital status can be revealed upon request and can be mentioned in resume explicitly that it will be unblocked if any employer needs it at the final round of interview. Based on the request received, the candidate can decide upon the genuine interviewer and respond accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... as employees are mutually benefited. On the contrary, it is advisable to abst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, may, so, still, well, whereas, for instance, in short, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05797101449 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72720508085 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542028985507 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3493085811 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229843709208 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697117600245 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463609540509 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126822243516 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492430424034 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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