It is obvious that population of poor people is increased over the few years. This essay will confront the worries faced by the poor and project possible solutions to solve this problem.
Firstly, the reason for extending count of poor people is due to uprising of war in border across two countries. Both countries are equally armed and they are fighting for their stand. Consequently, there are people who are left stranded without their family heads after the war. Miserably, they lose them in war. Hence, they are prone to poverty and, unable to handle finance of family. Secondly, there is an explosion in population in underdeveloped slum areas, so they are not handle the education or family
expenses.
Thirdly, unemployment is major fact to poor, as there is discrimination in finding suitable job for them in Multinational companies. Finally, they are also affected by natural disaster and they are unable to retrieve their properties lost after their recent storm. they also have not received any compensation from government for storm because of their underdeveloped area.
Obviously, there are three possible solutions for these issues. Most importantly, countries can initiate peace talks by negotiating with their counterpart by sharing their farm produce or the products that other country is lacking with. This would solve the worries of poor people of losing their family member permanently. Additionally, Government can implement strict laws such as "One family One child" making the population rise to be under control. Similarly, Richer countries such as Japan can expand their company to poor countries and enable employment for poor in Car industry, Two wheeler industry.
In conclusion, successful negotiations, Government stringent laws on birth control and globalization of countries in underdeveloped areas are effective in dealing with issue. If government practices these solutions, Percentage of poor people would soon drop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50657894737 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93075675894 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8857932916 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250076058511 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768822660333 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590133491259 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13322589148 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443992307018 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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