Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this era of globalization, people are occupied in their work as they want to be famous throughout the world. Moreover, this trend required a common language for communication and owing to this myriad of indigenous languages are vanished every year. Fair amount of people advocate that life will be simple as the less number of languages in the world. I partially agree with this statement and illustrating my points of view in the ensuing paragraphs.

To commence with, in this get set era where tough competition for every brand, company and business and most of the industrialists wish to expand their trade worldwide, it is compulsory that there will no communication gap with the clients and this is the causing factor to establish a single common language for communication. For instance, many U.S. software companies have branches over different countries and employees are communicating with each other in the English language. That means if a Chinese engineer sends a mail to another branch in South Africa, all the mails should be propagated in the English language rather than their own different national languages.

On the flip side, the number of scholars believe that it might ruin the history and culture of a country. Additionally, a person can attain the true level of meaning of different kinds of preaches in their own dialect rather than other countries ' languages. Moreover, it might be causing factor of huge loss of plethora of entertainment industries. For instance, every country has its own film industry where movies are released in their own national language. In country like India where films are released in their national language and many regional languages due to its diversity and get huge money collection on box-office. However, if there are only a few languages, the industry will be confined which redundant the economy.

To conclude, I think language should be common in professional life and specific sectors where it is necessary, but focus on the native language to live the culture and many other vital growth of the nation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... own dialect rather than other countries languages. Moreover, it might be causing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84382412257 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.245616253 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.285714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212688220404 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07388726338 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531657011307 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137395536513 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692133996355 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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