Experts show that old people were happier and healthier in the past. Actually, in this contemporary era, elderly suffer loneliness a lot, because they do not have tight communication with their relatives, neighbors and generally other people like past. In this essay, we want to discuss why this happens? And what solutions could have?
For the first, old people are retired and do not have any job, so spend all their time at home solely. Moreover, their children who are today's parents should work as much as they can, to afford life's expenses, therefore, they do not have time to visit grandparents a lot. In addition, Increasing the number of vehicles with fossil fuels emission dangerous gases like Carbon dioxide and CO into the atmosphere, which causes hazard illnesses, such as heart attack and other problems for people especially elderly.
Secondly, as an effective solution, people should pay more attention to elderly, because they are in a sensitive situation not just physically, but also mentally. On the other hand, the government should provide some special places for elderly, to get together, talk and play. They can also provide some entertaining tours for them to visit for instance museum or historical sites. Although medical care should be free and more powerful for them because they have a weaker immune system than adults.
To sum up, old people need more attention because of their age condition and people along with government have significant duties to support them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16444444444 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55060777071 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662222222222 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4260498903 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.636363636 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250710136037 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986128116031 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625845977946 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149530643267 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807530401558 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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