Thanks to the enhancement of technology, people nowadays are more likely to read news or magazine on the Internet rather than buying printed newspapers. Some people say that in the future, there is nobody would newspapers anymore because they can surf everything online without any costs. In my point of view, I completely agree with this statement because of its perks; however, it also has some drawbacks.
On the one hand, people tend to read everything online can be attributed to many reasons. Firstly, accessing the Internet and reading on it does wonders for the reader because this way is more convenient and useful. Those who read online do not only need to pay monthly fees for newspapers but also can achieve a wide range of information from all around the world. Moreover, they can access online magazines with some basic steps and can do at everywhere and every time they want to read.
In another perspective, concentrating on online news has some downsides. Initially, people might absorb unreliable information, it is difficult to distinguish between fake news and the truth on the Internet. There is a lot of news pages or websites that only want to get more viewers even if they realize that it is fake news. Furthermore, spending a couple of hours on the screen to read magazines contributes to the tiredness and illness of eyes because the display contains blue light which is not good for human eyes.
In summary, although there are some disadvantages of online news, as a human, I personally think that people should try to attain news online due to the convenience and affordable price.
- The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years 73
- The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia at present and in future Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features 67
- Society is based on rules and laws It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion
- The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here and every time they want to read. In another perspective, concentrating on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93772893773 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70088837202 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4451250392 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248448012046 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888414771665 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06344570448 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141928053579 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869228321546 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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