It is said that neighbors are the first family, as they are the people nearest to us. In old days, people used to keep friendly like and family like relation with their neighbors, but in this era, people are too busy with themselves that, at ties they do not even know their neighbors. This is because of fast moving life and lack of time management by this generation of people.
As said above, in olden times, people used to share all their happiness as well as sorrows with their neighbor. Neighbors are the people staying near to you, with whom you can celebrate and share you feelings during hard times. The most important time used to be the festival time, where every one comes together and celebrate like a family. Even children had others to play with. But in recent times, due to competitive life style and shortage of time, it is difficult to maintain neighborly relations.
With building of big societies, there should increase in neighbor interaction, but it is not happening. To overcome such situation, people should start interacting with each other more frequently, start get together parties etc. Women at home can do kitty parties, through this they can maintain healthy relations too. Children's should play on the playground, instead of playing virtual games at home.
Such activities in a society can help in building relations with each other, and for children it is of more importance, interacting with other children can help them to develop. So it is important to build up contacts with neighbors.
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- Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important. Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91505791506 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56162403206 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6196896058 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3425548704 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11495795096 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729754799205 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209130180767 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438484512865 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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