Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Earlier, nature has been influenced by negative aspects, which it is caused by human. I will illusterate what are the causes of global warming and how it can be solved by government and habitants alike.
On the one hand, Global warming has become a big issue in all parts of the world. Every country suffers from this catastrophic pehenomenon. So causes could happen accordingly. Firstly, non renewable resources users are responsible to create these effects. For example, human invented cars working on fuel, despite getting benefits from it, but it will be harmful by increasing the proportion of air polloutions. Secondly, people depend constantly on these non renewable resources will decrease fuel flow in the future. Whereas, these recources migh be vanished. Lastly, deforestation is a reason to increase global warming. When people overexploit in using it, it will dramatically affect on increasing it to the highest point.
So, government has an integral part on putting a limit to tackle this issue. For example, it could include such courses into schools, and universities as well. In connection to this point, people will learn about the importance of keeping balance on earth for the purpose of avoiding global warming on the coming years. As it could encourage citizens to use renewable resources to diminish polloution on earth. As a result, it can increase taxes on cars which it functionts on fossil fuel, and decreasing levies on electric cars ” hybrids”, so people will have the encouragment to purchase these kinds of cars. While people who work on cutting trees must undergo to punishment by increasing taxes levels on them. In this case, they will try to take it off this habit. Hence, they will slowly convert to renewable resources.
In breif, educating people about harms of global warming will support to diminsh from using non renewable sources. Furthermore, increasing levies on cars which it works on fuel. It will convert human to use hybrids as alternative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21538461538 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84957632063 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563076923077 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.792353451 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2105263158 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165516699518 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462829234381 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100341077526 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124590025251 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721634256013 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.