The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
It is thought by some people that successful man should have diversity of specialties and tend do not waste all life for one area of working. There is also a controversial meaning, which implies that contemporary youth ought to develop in particular occasion and in this case only they have an opportunity to thrive as a specialist. I strongly believe that the modern way of having couple of careers is much better for us and benefits our society.
To begin with, the single career has its own advantages. This is a great opportunity to reach good results in particular area. Usually, people who chose this way, start their career as an apprentice and moves forward to get promotion. However, few years later, these people can lose their interest in their job and run into depression. Ukrainian psychologists described this situation as a ‘middle age’s crisis’. It means that a man obtained all possible knowledge in his occasion and he doesn’t know what to do next.
The several ways of earning money afford people to broad their horizons by infinite studying. This way implies that you won’t stop at the top and will always obtain diverse educations and skills. Choosing this way, you will avoid problems related to lack of experience that could be a reason to be fired or be an obstacle to be employed. Your experience would be valuable and could be utilized among new company. To give a clear example, the general manager of Ukrainian company, Pavel Timoshenko is one of the most successful businessmen of my native city. He began a career as a simple gasfitter and five years later he became a manager of whole department. However, he wasn’t afraid of going through changes and after 5 years of managing he decided to leave the company and go to study in university to obtain financial education. As a result, his has been working in financial field for 7 years and finally become a general manager of immense company of Ukraine.
In conclusion, the modern tend to have a few careers is much more profitable for people. It opens new possibilities for population, affords them to explore their possibilities and prevent some psychological deceases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 388, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ychologists described this situation as a 'middle age's crisis'. I...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...he several ways of earning money afford people to broad their horizons by infinite stu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'in particular', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220902612827 0.247107183377 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.16864608076 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0902612826603 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0403800475059 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0593824228029 0.0437548338989 136% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.104513064133 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0356294536817 0.0403226058552 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89163088107 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0380047505938 0.0326793684256 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.083135391924 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190023752969 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0118764845606 0.011925033212 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2186.0 1933.35771543 113% => OK
No of words: 367.0 316.048096192 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95640326975 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354223433243 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283378746594 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196185286104 0.203846283523 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128065395095 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89163088107 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.037074148 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588555858311 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 68.6987030645 60.7387585426 113% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3157894737 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9874508371 49.517814964 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.052631579 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 47.6536641331 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.34513274336 1.69124875643 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385926083865 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0983144569652 0.102741220458 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0994045882782 0.0668466124924 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455525593839 0.534860350844 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115714410807 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12401167766 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074366877701 0.0742795772207 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.231963279534 0.324371583561 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0500120469766 0.0638462369009 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221249515697 0.228012699653 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113101476635 0.058150111329 194% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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