In recent years, usage of mobile phones becoming rapidly growing and significantly people use these devices to interact with others over the air and this changes the style of living and people can do chores without any physical effort. Whilst, It does devote negative impacts like health issues and sometimes against with environment. This essay describes the positive aspect of Cellular Phones and how it negatively influences people socially.
On the one hand, due to communication technology growth, mobile phone features developed immensely. As a result, many people use the communication device for not only communicating with others, it is also used for making business improvements. Over the past 2 years, the Facebook market is one of the best marketing strategies which is followed by the upcoming business profiles. Most predominantly, now every smart device has Facebook as default features so that everyone can make use of it. Therefore, it is apparent that depends on the usability of mobile devices would bring down the effect of humans' physical effort.
Conversely, such devices devoting health problems like over radiation, eardrum infections as well as serious Neck issue. In addition to that, according to the survey which is unveiled by the Networking Administration Department denotes 90% of people getting affected by the radiation are who have been overuse the devices frequently. The important issue is, most of them are students. As they are the one who has spent their half of the time on mobile phones for gaming, talking, and addiction of social applications such as Whatsapp, Facebook et cetera.
To put it in a nutshell, it is obvious that people using mobile phones for their communication and for developing business. I believe everyone should perceive the effects of using cellular mobile and most predominantly, the government has to disseminate awareness programs to induce people to occupy their time on mobile effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34838709677 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90065118815 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2405590247 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202817978789 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652013245628 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619588825089 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122476972214 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389151843872 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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