An increasing number of children are overweight which could result in many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?
In recent times, a sharp rise in cases related to obesity in children has been evident in many countries. Due to this obese youngsters might face many health issues in the future, along with high health care costs. In my opinion, this trend could be linked to the sedentary lifestyle and the eating habits of the youngsters, which can be solved with more informed choices related to food and exercise.
Nowadays, lack of physical activity has lead to a myriad of lifestyle diseases. According to medical professionals, sitting is the new smoking. Teenagers often stay indoors due to their dependence on technology for recreational and educational activities. Therefore, they devoid themselves of any form of exercise that could help them stay in shape. Additionally, the consumption of fast food could also be linked to many health problems in young children. For example, the ingredients and chemical preservatives used in the preparation of burgers and pizzas are linked to Type-1 Diabetes. Furthermore, misinformed parents often introduce their children to unhealthy food choices at an early age. This could adversely affect their weight because they are unaware of the ill effects high carbohydrates and fats in their diet.
Obesity in children can be controlled with the help of informed choices and encouragement towards a better lifestyle. Schools should encourage children to participate in sports and subjects such as Physical education should be mandatory. Moreover, parents should set an example by eating nutritious food and regular jogging or swimming. This could help create awareness of the importance of staying fit within the household. These steps could help create a better future for those who are struggling with their weight.
To sum up, the younger generation can work towards a healthier future if they can have the right information and support from their relatives. Many diseases stem from being overweight, therefore, any individual must look after their eating habits and exercise regularly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38050314465 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85478653818 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3047782356 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0555555556 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278427300194 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771187629021 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679205569183 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158311831579 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510082807804 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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