Internet has become as essential part of our life, everything we are using is now connected with internet, therefore, our living style has been changing dramatically. Due to this technology there are many things which we are able to perform in much fast compared to past, like sending e-mails, internet based banking, mobile phones, social networking sites have become tremendously fast and user friendly. In this essay, I will discuss pros and cons of internet based services which we are using quite frequently in our daily routine.
Internet has made our life much easy and there are many positive points, like, first point is performing tasks using internet save huge amount of time. For example, every business house used email which make them to communicate with other in most fastest mode, it takes just few milliseconds to send and receive the email irrespective to distance between the sender and receiver. Secondly, main advantage is flexibility, Internet allow us to connect with the world using at any location and place. Now we can make phone call while traveling on the flight, blue-tooth based music systems installed in the car allows driver to make phone call and navigate the road- route, while driving the car. There scenarios make the our living style change and help us to do the tasks in less time.
On the other side, there are few cons which must be considered, as for every good thing we have to pay something. Therefore, there are few dark points are connected with internet. like, Still internet network is unsafe to keep the data secure and costly for many countries. For and example, recently, facebook admits that they have shared the personal information of their user,with third party company . Moreover, there are many nations where internet is quite expansive, so that is makes make internet services few effective and people are still want to continue with traditional method.
To conclude, This essay had discussed both plus and negative points, but there is long way to go. I hope in future we things will change in more effective ways
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'fastest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: fastest
... make them to communicate with other in most fastest mode, it takes just few milliseconds to...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the fastest'.
Suggestion: most the fastest
... make them to communicate with other in most fastest mode, it takes just few milliseconds to...
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Line 3, column 716, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...e driving the car. There scenarios make the our living style change and help us to do t...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...ark points are connected with internet. like, Still internet network is unsafe to ke...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...d the personal information of their user,with third party company . Moreover, there a...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n of their user,with third party company . Moreover, there are many nations where ...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...discussed both plus and negative points, but there is long way to go. I hope in f...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
... is long way to go. I hope in future we things will change in more effective ways
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, while, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99711815562 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47113739316 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582132564841 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3184979367 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190452335528 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679002358497 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465163920163 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113884240661 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330735698399 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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