It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is discussed that getting married before ending school education or having a job is not a good choice. Therefore, I will discuss in details why it is not a good option to get married before before being ready to marriage as following;
First of all, there is a great link between education and obtaining a job. It is necessary to youngers to finish their education before going a step ahead. Nowadays, a certain jobs of labour market requires education certificate as proof for getting employed, however, youngers with no certificate will encounter some difficulties in finding the job, hence it will be limited chances open for them. In addition, finishing study will support them to be adapted according to life condition, as they may learn through it the meaning of true life. So no need to be in hurry to marry, as a consequence, they might be a lot of liablites over your shoulders.
Furthetmore, you can not marry, if you are not fully adapted to further situations. A successful marriage requires a little time to plans after your graduation, and getting a good job in the labour market, which it may help to cover your expenditures after marriage. To illustrate, there are a lot of reports show in middle East that people who have not finished their education become jobless, although they got married, they found a different of complicated issues and obstacles which it led to divorce consequently.
On the contrary, people who completed their education, they found their future open for them. As a result, they have gotten a successful relationship, as they arrange everything in advance.
In brief, getting married before finishing studying will affect on you negatively in the coming days. Therefore, it will no be a good idea to marry before finishing your study and getting a job. As you have to be completely adapted for next situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: before
... it is not a good option to get married before before being ready to marriage as following; ...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... step ahead. Nowadays, a certain jobs of labour market requires education certifi...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... married before finishing studying will affect on you negatively in the coming days. Ther...
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Line 9, column 122, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... in the coming days. Therefore, it will no be a good idea to marry before finishin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in brief, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93015873016 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83482642621 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520634920635 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2882117373 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273237783588 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116564035341 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124049072693 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180294744628 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140056891791 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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