Over the past few years more and more people have been greatly affected by one disease or the other as a result of poor physical activities. I strongly agree that physical education and sports should be made compulsory for all school children including teenagers.
There are obvious reasons why physical education and sport be made compulsory in all schools. One reason is to keep children healthy and physically fit for each day in school. Because in-activities can lead to obesity, high blood pressure and respiratory diseases that are generally common in the society today. However, many parent lack physical activities that can be pass on to their children. And this can be detrimental to their overall physical well-being.
Secondly, children learn better in school when they are physically fit. A child who lack activity and proper nutrition will keep falling sick and always fall behind is peers in school. To prevent this issue federal and state government are so meticulous about the nutrition and activities of children by implement good physical activities in all school.
In conclusion, federal and state government should continue to monitor all physical and sport education in all school to help keep young ones active for each daily activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ell-being. Secondly, children learn better in school when they are physically fit....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26108374384 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68503184445 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5960591133 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3019932062 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356492982185 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15030196217 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141208227803 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237143034506 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774943984102 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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