In today's modern world traveling has become popular among people in most of the countries. Nowadays, people tend to spend a lot more than before specially in going to foreign land. Now, many people think that it is an unnecessary expense and tedious to travel abroad. However, I firmly believe, it is absolutely important to do so as it definitely has a positive impact on the society.
To begin with, it is essential for the cultural upliftment of a nation because when people travel to different parts of the world and exchange notions and information which is when incorporated into one's culture, it inevitably improves the standard of life style of those people. For example, zero number was invented in India and it was then recognized and used worldwide. Without it, it would have been impossible to progress in mathematics or to even able to count. Hence, it is vital to visit other countries and to share knowledge.
Furthermore, we all have only one life to live and the world is full of beautiful things that one must see. I can reminisce that when I traveled to Paris last year, I was astonished to see "Eiffel Tower". It was a breath taking moment. For me it was like a dream come true. Although, I had seen a lot of other spectacular things but I also got an opportunity to relish the famous french cuisine and learning some of the popular dishes.
To recapitulate, I would say that I do admit that it is quite expensive for some people to visit foreign countries but I can also mention assertively that it is worth spending so much money because in modern era one's life is very stressful and traveling allows to take a break from that monotonous schedule. Therefore, it is not only necessary to rejuvenate but also to enlighten one's mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...rmation which is when incorporated into ones culture, it inevitably improves the sta...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... and to share knowledge. Furthermore, we all have only one life to live and th...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the famous french cuisine and learning some of the popular dishes. To recapitulate, I w...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ing so much money because in modern era ones life is very stressful and traveling al...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
... is very stressful and traveling allows to take a break from that monotonous schedule. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71612903226 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7613355438 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6084651345 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152001903506 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460238053927 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424223994695 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927255053304 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571638288952 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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