While it is true that youngsters need to take up voluntary work for some time in their life to assist the residents of their communities. This work is offering many benefits to teenagers. However, sometimes a few issues emerge due to voluntary work. The following paragraphs would discuss the merits and the demerits of social service taken up by young adults.
Firstly, youth will gain work experience from voluntary work in local communities. They can use this experience while applying for jobs and companies always consider previous work which increases the chance of getting a job, additionally, communities get benefitted from the service provided by minors.
Secondly, after college education, youngsters will have some spare time. They can utilize this time in useful activities like helping people by joining social service organizations. This gives them the opportunity to meet people from various cultures which will help adults to think open-minded and learn about their cultures and societies. Most importantly communication skills will be developed with people's interactions. In addition, teenagers start feeling more responsible towards society.
On the other hand, as youngsters are new to unpaid jobs, they not deliver the commitments as agreed with the organization. They feel pressurzied and become stressed. Moreover, social service demands time and patience. Since minors' tolerance levels are less compared to elders, they get angry at times which is suitable for the social organizations they serve. Often, young adults feel that working at a social service organization is a wastage of time and effort instead they are interested to invest the time in making money.
In a nutshell, I believe that the advantages overweigh the disadvantages. However, efforts should be made to encourage young adults to allocate some time to do social service from their busy life. The demerits are minimal, whereas there are several benefits to the society and youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47727272727 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84823545106 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2635250903 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7894736842 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155579724074 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443881641987 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428250615403 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089848434342 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289532191546 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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