It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married beforethey are 30 as this is best both for individual and for society Do you agree or disagree

Marriage is about finding a compatible partner with whom you decide to share happiness and sorrow. Marriage is regarded as important aspect for both an individual and a society. Right age for marriage is most discussed topic where most people support marriage should be done before the age of 30. For me marriage is long term decision which depends on a finding perfect and compatible match rather than following rigid age limitation.

It is apparent that society creates limit and barriers in each aspect of human life and marriage before 30 is one aspect. I believe that marriage at early age is not suitable as in early age i.e below 20 an individual is not mentally prepared and financially stable. An individual has a lot more things to achieve education, financial stability and mental preparedness. The debit about marriage before 30 can pressurize an individual to grasp a decision of marriage without their mental preparedness.

Marriage demands maturity to take care about own selves and whole new family. Marriage is conscious decision and it is undeniable that marriage brings stability in a persons life. The pressure of marriage before 30 sometime associates some detrimental factors. People may rush to get married when they are not prepared, they may hold partners who are not compatible to them. Marriage is a sound decision and life long planning. Marriage decision should be when an individual is ready for it not when you reaching the age limit.

To sum up, we should not consider marriage as task. Task has certain deadline. But marriage should not depend on deadline. It should consider a compatible partner, metal and conscious decision and self confidence that you are ready for the marriage. On this note, age before or after 30 is not the priority but matured age when you are is ready is most for marriage.

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Average: 7.9 (6 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99675324675 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68477047334 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503246753247 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9039566027 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42105263158 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1944739502 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689586454289 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649009023947 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135376789523 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498925953983 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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