Over the last two decades, Information technology has done profound inventions which brought so much comfort and ease to the society. However, oppose to this notion, some people believes future development in the field of IT boast more negative effects. This essay will strongly argue why foreseeable future of IT will be boon for everyone rather than plague.
The first and foremost, IT is ubiquitous and its strong impacts can be seen in medical sector. Modern equipments can be devised by engineers for creating a revolution in this sector. Professionals are developing well-versed robots for completing their jobs in operations with efficacy. Health sector is changing with IT developments in skyrocketing manner.
Secondly, IT has been lending laudable improvements in education sector. Indeed, education from schools and universities are foremost way of getting knowledge about any subject. The paramount example of improvements in education sector are online teaching classes with the evolution of internet from last decade. Education is one are where information technology is doing most of its developments which demonstrates its exemplary advantages to be used.
Moreover, In the security sector, IT has alleviated those people who are undermining our democracy. It also helps officials to cushion the meddling and pervasive acts from outsiders community. IT also provides several amenities to its consumers to bring forth ease in their lives. Keeping the advantages aside, however, the negative impacts of the technology cannot be ignored. It is often forecasted that the negative impacts would be more severe in the future. For example, with the usage of the email system, the traditional way of communication has been destroyed such as letter writing, face to face conversation and it kills our personal touch with others. This will further decline people's basic ability to socialise and interact with each other in the future. The dependency on technology will bring catastrophe if something goes wrong and the way we are becoming dependent is quite alarming.
To recapitulate, IT is mobilized in every sector almost and in future its effects can be seen with more positiveness. This essay discussed the future developments are more to be boon for everyone alike.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5643153527 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04206263467 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601659751037 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7134953325 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167727460018 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556159697528 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482354694288 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087339655002 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053070296324 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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