Nowadays a number of old people experience anxiety and prefer living in solitude rather than expressing their fears. As a result, they keep away from crowded areas, seldom stepping out for any physical activities thus spending a majority of their time indoors. Two of the majors reasons could be addiction to social media and age related problems. Two of the possible solutions are to disconnect from the virtual world and spend some time in the real world along with indulging in some light physical activities.
These days people spend most of their time surfing social media sites and crave validation along with trying to compare their lives with others. If they are lacking certain beauty standard or skills that are portrayed online many go into depression and isolate themselves from the world thus resulting in loneliness. Recently, the trend of body size zero is gaining popularity all over the internet and those aiming to achieve it resort to unhealthy methods such as harmful dieting or extreme exercise routine. People failing to keep up with these trends consider themselves to be failures and sometimes even contemplate suicide as they are unable to keep up with the pressure.
An important solution is to restrict the time spent online and meet and interact with more people around. Time limit should to be set for accessing social media and outdoors activities should be given paramount importance. According to a recent study many people felt less depressed and revitalized when they went for a jog or run as the fresh air and boost in blood flow increased their energy. Moreover, participating in outdoor activities helps you meet new people and enables you to share ideas and strategies for the well being of the team.
To conclude, the realms of your life is in your hand and no one can change your life but you! It is never too late to bring about a change in lifestyle and with the right amount of dedication and persistence anything is possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun go seems to be countable; consider using: 'many goes', 'many gos'.
Suggestion: many goes; many gos
...ard or skills that are portrayed online many go into depression and isolate themselves ...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'resorts'?
Suggestion: resorts
...internet and those aiming to achieve it resort to unhealthy methods such as harmful di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94294294294 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51608287132 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600600600601 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.194674175 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173537666929 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571833074184 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338179246937 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945507235799 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034018776551 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.