Newspapers, television, internet are full of advertisements nowadays with one or the other product. However few people argue that advertisements are not beneficial for the promotion if the product is excellent. I partially support the above notion and will be explaining with examples in the forthcoming paragraphs.
How do people know when a new product is launched in the market? It is definitely through advertisements that consumer becomes aware of the products. Regardless of the platform, it is vital for the company to explain the features of it and attract the audience. Country Delight, for instance, a milk product Company, became successful as a result of giving free milk subscription and explaining about its quality to the public in the mall. Not only this but also sometimes the brand is promoted by their role models so that it can help build trust between brand and the client. For example, MRF Bats when promoted by Sachin Tendulkar became sensation in the youth and many children want those bats to play.
On the contrary, in my opinion, when you deliver the best quality you do not have to make the noise in the market as quality speaks for itself. Apple, for example, do not hire any celebrity to promote their cell phones because have already captured a larger audience and gained trust of their users. Additionally, it might take a long time to grow and reach out to the customers, but gradually people get to know about the good products that are prevailing in the market through each other. Balenciaga, as an example, a fashion brand, has no showrooms and doesn't promote in India but still people are seen wearing its clothes because the fabric and design that it has is unmatchable and people are aware about it.
To conclude, it is necessary for start ups that they promote their product to gain clients. On the other hand, brands which have their own value since ages do not have to spend money on promotions and focus more on retaining the quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86135693215 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65672828905 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.416046273 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.866666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109174265722 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401291243604 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321855885944 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710522423589 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029792282142 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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