It is true that most of the countries bring a strict rule to avoid smoke in public places and considered it as illegal. If individual wants to smoke he/she has to move to the designated areas. This essay totally agrees with the notion, which is further discussed with valid reasons and suitable examples.
To embark upon, ‘’ Smoking is injurious to health’ is posted on every public places to give awareness about the poisonous effects it can cause to human. The main reason to prohibit in public places or work place is to protect the non- smokers from its side effects. It had been proven in different studies that nonsmokers have more side effects especially, in lungs, than a chain smoker who inhale the smoke of cigars. Moreover, it has an adverse effect on newborn babies and pregnant women.
The second reason, is the hindrance it can cause to regular smoking pattern. It is obviously difficult for a human to change any habit suddenly. By this law people at offices or public places have to move somewhere else when they want to smoke. In this scenario, the frequent smoker feels disruption or sometimes lazy to move out. So,he/ she may plummet the number of cigars. Gradually, the individual can reduce the count of cigars which he used to smoke regularly. For example, I personally know several persons who reduce the cigars, only to avoid walk until permitted area.
To recapitulate, I totally agree with the smoking law as it obstruct the smoking pattern of heavy smokers as well as save the life of nonsmokers from its harmful effects
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ic places and considered it as illegal. If individual wants to smoke he/she has to...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
...uption or sometimes lazy to move out. So,he/ she may plummet the number of cigars. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, second, so, well, as to, for example, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86567164179 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52997181941 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8143360495 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201863337224 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627893466342 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385162867805 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123679032077 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143769230034 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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