Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from
Prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
It is true that many criminals engage them on more crime activities after discharging from the jail. There could be some reasons for such a choice, and I believe that both government and individual should take steps to deter them from prior lifestyle.
Unemployment is the main issue for prisoners after an imprisonment. Most employers would refuse them to recruit for past criminal records, and they fail to earn money for living. However, it will easier for them to earn money if they reunite with old criminal groups and involve in illegal work. Thus, they would proceed with more criminal activities for earning money. A recent survey shows that in America, 30% of hijackings have done by criminals who were in police custody for different period. Therefore, we could argue that lack of job opportunity encourage criminals to carry out more crimes after a period of punishment.
Both government and individuals should tackle above mentioned issue with some steps in order to reduce their crime tendency. The government can implement some rehabilitation program for prisoner in the jail which will offer them to self correction by consulting with psychologist. For Example, In Norway women’s jails provide such a program that weekly once or twice have to consult with psychologist and improving their disturbing thought. This helps criminals to find the way of dispelling from the crime habit. In addition, as a member of society we should appreciate them if they want to work rather than reject for criminal records. It will solve their unemployment issues as well as surviving cost.
In conclusion, both governments and people must play their part to divert the lawbreakers from additional crime activities after releasing from prison.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23758865248 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75846639717 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2494444397 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982758504556 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406605238233 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337287379463 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616165863985 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117545895187 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.