Since the last century, the popularity of social networking sites such as Facebook has grown significantly. Although these sites have grown in their user's database, yet a section of society believes that these sites have affected both society and an individual negatively. In my perspective, I firmly agree with the statement because addiction to social sites could impact the following: health and family. This essay will discuss both these issues with relevant examples in support of my view.
The increased role of social networking sites in our lives has impacted the health of our society and an individual. Nowadays, everyone prefers spending extended hours on these sites over the outdoor physical activities due to which cases of many health ailments such as obesity, high blood pressure, and high cholesterol are increasing in individuals. Undeniably, an unhealthy individual will rise to an unfit society, as they are directly related to each other. The growth and development of society will be affected by the upsurge of health issues because more funds will be required to provide health care to all. For instance, as per the survey conducted by the Health Department of India reveals that the number of health-related cases has been increasing exponentially each year since the evolution of social sites. Consequently, the budget on health care has also inclined by fifty percent. Therefore, increasing usage of social networking sites is one of the prominent reasons for causing health problems, thereby affecting individuals and society.
In addition to health, increasing usage of social sites is also impacting families because the involvement of an individual in his or her family has reduced, thereby promoting conflicts and misunderstanding, which eventually lead to divorce or nuclear families. These circumstances impact the psychological condition and life of an individual due to anxiety, depression, and emotional pressure after such incidents. Furthermore, our social structure is built on numerous social values, and the family is one of the most important among them, unarguably. The breakdown of a family culture diminishes the moral values, resulting in many heinous crimes such as rape and genocide, which pose a threat to the peace and prosperity of a society. For example, reports released by the Government has shown that the children from a dysfunctional family background are more likely to involve in juvenile crimes. Thus, it is evident that increased exposure could lead to conflicts that could affect an individual life and also increase criminal activities in society.
In conclusion, spending more time on social sites could trigger the health and family issues for an individual; also affects society because any impact on a person has ramifications on our social structure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2388.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42727272727 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95558023837 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504545454545 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 764.1 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8959778203 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191261222032 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067775453469 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496292770546 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129803740178 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459542788911 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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