To begin with, health and wealth are considered the two most significant aspects to live a healthy and joyous life. If anyone of them is missing from one’s life, it is said that sadness will prevail. However, some of us think that money is more important to live a lavish and stress-free life. This essay will evaluate the significance of money in people’s lives as well as if it is really needed to enjoy life.
Firstly, in the modern world, people often considered themselves prosperous only if they have an ample amount of money. Wealth is one of the most important things to have nowadays. Moreover, not just it brings respect to the person but power and fame as well. Though some of us might argue that money cannot buy happiness, it is always better to cry in a car rather than a bicycle.
Next, even though rich people may be famous and powerful but they may necessarily not be happy as wealth and fame come with a cost. For instance, an ordinary person can go out in the crowd and enjoy street food but a rich and famous person will have to think twice before doing so. Going out in the crowd without caring for their privacy is a luxury for the riches nowadays. They may afford the most expensive cars and dine in the most luxurious restaurants but they don’t feel secure in the crowd and remain miserable.
Lastly, the significance of money cannot be denied and it is needed to live a joyful life. However, happiness cannot be measured through the amount of money one has. There have been multiple personalities such as Swami Vivekanand and APJ Abdul Kalam, who died poor but had the most amazing lives and people still remember them because of their knowledge and deeds.
In essence, even a poor person can live a happy life and though money is important it doesn’t define joy. In my opinion, people should focus more on defining their ultimate goals and try to fulfill them to have the time of their lives rather than focusing on earning more money. If they are good at something, fame and wealth will follow them eventually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, really, so, still, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6393442623 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42533705833 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510928961749 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.597891462 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191521248416 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650169926805 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495091960475 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117038779105 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354176815257 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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