In this day and age, time is considered to be more precious than money. Many individuals work prolong hours at the expense of leisure time. While working hard is good for one's career, the impact of this on the health and well-being of the individual is often forgotten. This essay will elucidate the repercussion of working extensively: impact on individuals' well-being and health.
It is an irrefutable fact that working hard is the key to success. In the contemporary world, where there is intense competition and scarcity of employment, people try to give their best to achieve their goals. In doing so, they left will little time to spend on their families and friends. According to medical research by the health department of the USA, individuals who spent less time with their relatives tend to have a high amount of stress. This stress can not only impact the health of the individuals but also effect the well-being of that individual.
Another study conducted by the medical community of the UK reveals that those who work long hours have laid back attitude towards health. As there is very little time spent on oneself, the individuals usually prefer junk food and work-out little. A survey conducted in Japan where an average employee works more than any other employee around the world have found that heart disease and diabetic conditions are common among this section of society.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that working extensively by ignoring leisure time is not only harmful to health but also the well-being of oneself. In my opinion, the government and work-force agencies should closely monitor and amend laws that take care of the well-being of the work-force.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...re time. While working hard is good for ones career, the impact of this on the healt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07746478873 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69953561951 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1438739068 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240300112929 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868136541555 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553472628309 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143759254579 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060322207413 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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