In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
In many parts of the world, there has been a healthy discussion about whether or not to build new home in the countryside. It is argue by some people that it is paramount to save the backcountry and try not to build new homes for the public. I opine that it should be must to save the countryside.
To begin with, as the population is mushrooming very frequently like running water. To fulfill the basic amenities of the population, it is necessary to develop new houses. But there is no space in the old areas of the cities and developers prefer to construct new colonies out of the town. Resulted Farming land is decreasing. To illustrate, in 2014, In Australia, when countryside land areas used to develop houses for the people and on the same year production of rice was declined. Because it is very difficult for the farmers to prepare new land for the farming, as they do not know about the suitable environmental conditions of the new area.
In addition to above, when the upstate land is acquired by the builders to construct big housing societies or used by the local people to build their homes then most of the cattle fields are destroyed. Even various species or other animals lose their lives. Moreover, it is difficult for the municipal corporations to make arrangement of water supply, electricity and drainage system in the outer region of the city.
To conclude, to save the farming land, it is rudimentary for the authorities to develop multistory buildings in between the cities and also they should try to renovate the old houses and build new large towers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ere has been a healthy discussion about whether or not to build new home in the countryside. I...
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Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
...uild new home in the countryside. It is argue by some people that it is paramount to ...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...r the public. I opine that it should be must to save the countryside. To begin with,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75724637681 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73015120146 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4600442514 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283812611609 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944037859235 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931505006353 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177606411909 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972830099431 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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