In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
I strongly agree with the statement that, we should not build society or home in countryside. Although it's a dream of million of people to have their own house. In this notion firstly we will discuss about why countryside should be preserved. Secondly steps which required to save.
To embark on it, I would say it's not wrong to have a desire of your accommodation. Moreover government should provide some solution to save place like this. For example, india is developing and second highest populated country. However india like other countries also facing major issue of global warming. Weather has changed a lot since our childhood. Many files and agriculture land root cut into High end societies and apartments. if this construction continues then the consequences in future will be more dangerous. Glaciers are melting due to excessive warm environemnent.water is the another major problem. The day is not far when our generation will die of lack of water. Important steps should be taken in order to preserve more land. More tree nad plants should be grew and people should avoid more construction work in making money and creating space for public to live
on the other hand, Government should have impose strict law on construction. Every land of piece should not sell in sake of money. if we will not preserved nature. the quality of air and water will become more hazardous. For example people who live in cities are victim of dangerous diseases.
in this closure, more and more land should be purchased. Goverment should not allow people to use reserved land for building apartments. nature is need of hours.
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... reserved land for building apartments. nature is need of hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99264705882 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73812906536 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2305519219 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7272727273 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3636363636 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140231209547 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361656581409 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416070987244 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913789984417 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285533095427 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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