In this contemporary era, supermarkets have expanded across the globe. While a stratum a society claims that due to expansion of supermarkets, many local vendors are impacted, others argue that they serve the society in a better way. Although I partially agree with view, I will still delve into both the views.
On the one hand, supermarkets are giving a comfortable shopping experience to their customers by providing all the goods and services under a single roof. Nowadays purchasers can compare and select from a wide range of collections and they can shop foreign products from their nearby supermarkets. To exemplify, after the expansion supermarkets like Walmart and Reliance, people are introduced to many foreign products like California dates for its best quality and variety of pizza sauces, chocolates and perfumes. Previously, one can taste these kinds of products if somebody gift them when they visit from a foreign nation.
On the flip side, to save the local business from competition with the supermarkets, Governments can offer loan to them at a subsidized interest rate to expand their small business. Further, local stores owners’ can add their shops to the online shopping portals to increase their visibility and sales. For Instance, in giant online shopping portals like Amazon and Flipkart, many local businesses are selling their products across the globe with a reasonable profit margin and it helps them to survive in the business and to compete with the supermarkets.
To Conclude, I personally believe that supermarkets have some positive effects on the society, still there are few drawbacks to the local communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31558935361 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8537432556 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.55551964 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200299072269 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736835508049 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367488558793 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117408714766 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359793003595 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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