The majority of campus graduates are living with their parents, while few others are accommodating themselves in dormitories due to lack of commuting facilities to the universities. There are plenty of pros and cons with staying away from home for students.
starting university life is pivotal point in one's life as the chosen major will be his/her career in their lifetime. So, the students should be selective before picking their academics as well as accommodation. The students who are staying along with their parents need not worry about their basic needs and their personal works. Moreover, they were in safe hands and always pampered with love and affection, then they can concentrate and broaden their arms fully to boost up their grades. The recent studies confirmed that, students who are living in home, are accentuating their skills and showing significant results in their term assignments.
Though there are handful of advantages few other aspects also needs to be marked. Graduates who are opting for dormitories, paying guests has an excellent opportunity to get exposure on cultural diversity. They are able to mingle with others easily in the future. The academicians who are occupying in hostels are turning as independent and quick learners. A survey done by Chicago university reported that, parents believe their child has made impressive personality development and acting responsibly since he/she has attended university in another country.
To sum up, University education has a wide variety of roles to play in our life. Living apart from parents is an excellent chance to acquire life lessons and to evolve as a person. Despite the fact that some unwanted outcomes such as bad grades, home sick at the beginning but the final outcome is worthy.
- Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes Do you agree or disagree 79
- Some people point out that there will be less international travel in future. Do you think it is negative or positive trend?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
- Questions: In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development? 73
- Some people think that zoos are cruel and that all zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- People who have original ideas are of much greater value to society than those who are simply able to copy the ideas of others well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Starting
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t results in their term assignments. Though there are handful of advantages few oth...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'handfuls', 'handsful'?
Suggestion: handfuls; handsful
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, apart from, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23426573427 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73568945103 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3466093853 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338498347519 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969235073106 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619518884001 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185954530548 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724709971486 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.