Lack of physical exercise, have rapidly increased the health issues among the people who have a full time job. This essay will indicate the why workout is unpopular among the working class and suggest some solutions to tackle this situation.
Advanced technology may be counted as a major contributor towards lack of Physical movement. Earlier when we did not have cars and motor bikes, people used to ride bicycle to their work, if the public transport were used they had to walk a significant distance to reach the bus station or the trains. For example, before mixer grinder and vacuum cleaner were introduced in the market, women of the house used mortar and pestle for grinding the spices and swept the floor with a broom, this routine gave enough workout to their body before they left for the job.
Another factor which can be a reason why many working people are not getting enough exercise nowadays is because of the high competition among the employees to prove their worth. Each employee wants to earn more and achieve important position in their organization. However, in this run for the money, they compromise their heath by working for long hours and not dedicating any time for their body to relax. For example, In a recent survey two group were provided a project to complete within one week but one group had to stop working at five and indulge themselves in Jogging or attending gym, whereas, the other group was allowed to work as long as they desired. The result proved that participants in group one were not only able to finish the project on time but also had better project report in comparison with group two.
To resolve this situation, the office time should be limited to 5.00 or 6.00 pm. Company should come up with special programs by providing gym facilities or outdoor games in the office premises and encourage the staff to join.Incentives should be awarded to the employees who attend the gym regularly.
To conclude, Excess working hours and advanced technology is surely affecting the health of the employee, but with standard office times and facilities like gym and outdoor games provided by the company, people can keep a check on their health easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43844176109 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0653327776 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.153846154 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8461538462 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251904145674 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886511302703 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785586298957 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130526828063 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585187324648 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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