Most people would agree that married couples who have a full-time job must contribute equally towards managing the household and rearing the children. This essay supports the above argument in totality with a few valid reasons and examples from the day-to-day life of a modern family.
Running a household requires input from both the man and the woman in equal measure. The dawn of the 21st century has witnessed the collapse of the age-old system of strict gender roles. Now, its not just men who are responsible for earning money and women who have the duty of arranging and maintaining a household. Both the partners who are away from the house out on their full-time jobs earning money have an equal responsibility towards the various household chores. For example, it is common to see husbands doing the dishes while the wife prepares dinner after a typical busy day at the workplace.
In the same way, children require both parents' love and direction in their growth phase if they are to become confident and courageous to take on the nuances of the modern hectic lifestyle. The working men and women of today seem to be doing a satisfactory job in this regard by evenly distributing their responsibilities. For instance, it is not uncommon for today's man to change his baby's diapers or to sing a lullaby for the little one, thereby taking some burden off the shoulders of a tired mother after a working day.
In conclusion, this essay aims to shed some light on the fact that the modern mechanics of running a household and taking good care of the children require an even contribution from both the working man and woman.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81560283688 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61303007267 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.188527549 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.454545455 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272227202305 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947104230452 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651537659758 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154135709687 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260621439298 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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