Nowadays, youngsters spend more time with their friends than their families. This is happening because; parents fail to make a connection with their child when they are small. However, parents should not force their children to spend more time at home, as it will cause resentment, and be detrimental to their relationship.
In today’s busy world, parents are busy in their professional life, and they fail to develop a strong bond with their children. This results in them spending more time with their friends rather than with their parents. For example, Children who spent their time with their parents, when they were small are likely to spend more time with them even after they grow up, confirms a study conducted in 2018, by the University of Chicago.
Forcing youngsters to stay at home will not only cause frustration, but also be harmful for the relationship between the parents and their young ones. When teenagers are pressurized to do something without their consent, they will hate it and will react in a way that will hamper the relationship further. To prove this, University of Pennsylvania conducted a research to study the behavior of youth, and confirmed that young people are motivated to do things more willingly when they are rewarded and convinced than forced.
In conclusion, it is observed that the younger generation is spending more time with their peers than their families due to lack of bonding between parents and children, and to avoid this parents should not enforce their son/daughter to stay indoors, as this will only create hatred and bring more trouble than do any good .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0671641791 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59896768363 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7559891458 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.8 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.52895772635 0.244688304435 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267389103936 0.084324248473 317% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146058790306 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.379037311747 0.151304729494 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143256475065 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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