More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.Do you agree or disagree?
Educated people always want the best things in life especially to fulfill their professional aspirations. Graduates who does specialisation in fields like engineering, computing, medicine and many more are on a hunt to find better job opportunities as they eager for success so all of them try to move from one country to another in search of their dream. For this to happen the only option that comes to these brilliant minds is to go abroad or to settle in a rich and developed nation. The surveys done by employment firms has shown every 6 out of 10 worker is in demand in bigger countries and somewhat leaving their own considering it to be poor and not worthy of their caliber.
I agree with the above point because everyone need money, recognition and fame and will try all his best efforts to secure it. As, the developing nations are not able to give them what they desire so the rich nations comes into play with all the power that they have in the international market. The big leagues draws these candidates towards them by showing them the facilities, benefits and most importantly the respect they command in their respective field of work which somewhat increases the eagerness of a person.
Even, laws in richer countries are more strict and highly respected and obeyed in a proper way which kind off makes people drawn to these places more. A young job seeker is assured with the guarantee of future work opportunities and promotions and the last but not the least the fairness and equal treatment at workplace which is not possible in poor countries whom their own struggle has kept busy.
To sum up, people get qualification for a better life and to achieve their dreams and they will take whatever way to fulfill it and even the rich countries have realised this a long back and is using all their resources as a bait to lure the people who belongs to specialised trades and the facilities provided to them kind off makes the work for these countries easy and is the real source of their success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67134831461 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57500016853 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564606741573 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4715336667 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.3 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190163146901 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710955122529 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558355021342 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121504827737 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626310340257 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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