In our contemporary society, many people spend their leisure time in watching movies and TV shows. In great extent, people love to watch criminal films and TV programs. This essay will discuss the plausible reasons behind this phenomenon and its impact as a result on the society.
The First and the foremost reason, people found criminal movies are more entertaining than other social drama movies. Mostly criminal pictures or shows are based on real life events and have better stories than boring written scripts. Criminal movies are blockbusters nowadays as compared to big-star cast movies. This types of movies use more advance technologies to show their graphic scenes as to which people found them entertaining.
The secondary reason for this phenomenon could be media. These days news channels give such a hype to substantially increased crime to get higher TRP. You can found number of shows on News channels dedicately showing CCTV cameras clips of crime, short crime movies and so on. Because of the media who shows criminal life style so lavish and powerful, people found it interested than anything else.
Though people have great interest in watching this types of movies, it has multifarious impacts also. Firstly, it makes people aware of the crime activity. Secondly, it results in detrimental effects on people mentality. Thirdly, it makes people disappointed from the government policy. These several impacts can be seen on folks who enjoy watching criminal movies and daily shows.
In conclusion, crime has increased to such extent that people found it interesting to watch. This essay discussed multifarious reasons behind their interest and the impacts of watching it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31111111111 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5783098642 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1090410398 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40259028435 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129048106659 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720843432909 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236143807809 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699590159197 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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