When it comes to moving to a new neighborhood or for those who can afford it, to buying an apartment, one the most important aspect that people consider, is the level of crime in that area. High rates of crime can thus make the difference in choosing the best place to live, more than green areas, facilities and reliable public transportation. So, if crime can play a major role in picking the right neighborood, why are people so attracted by it? Several surveys have shown that crime movies or TV programs dealing with crime are rather popular among the spectators. Some argue even that watching this type of programs can have a negative impact on the behaviour of an individual and in turn, a detrimental effect on the whole society.
According to an old quote, the Devil has the best tunes. It is no surprise that people are obsessed with demons, zombies, vampires and that they find evil more fascinating the goodness. But why? When did evil start to be so alluring? An answer can be found in the fact that for centuries, people have been taught that the most important values in life are thrift, prudence, meekness, abstinence and industriosness. That is the point where goodness may have started to be felt as boring and restrictive. One more reason can find its roots in the power of the TV screen. Crime is in most of the cases showed from its shining side: fast cars, rivers of money and beatiful girls. The truth, everybody knows, is completely different, since most of the criminals end up to finish thierlife in prison or often they die. Despite this bitter truth, the sirens of crime are still seducing when it comes to watching a movie. Maybe people enjoy the personality of the characters acting in the movie, they admire their courage, their determination, their lack of fear. Movies basically have the make possible to escape from reality and to forget about life for a while. From this point of view, crime movies are not an expection.
A downside that many people point out, is that some individuals could be tend to imitate the deeds and the attitude of some actors.The fallouts of this decision could be therefore negative for the whole society. I think that watching a crime movie does not make automatically a spectator a criminal. Quite the opposite, this type of movies can help people to reflect about the value of life and that crime does not pay off.
In conclusion I do not see any particular negative aspects in crime movies and TV programs that deal with crime. After all, the public finds them more compelling and interesting than footages or documentaries. Furthermore, watching tose programs can turn out to be a teachful experience about the human nature and how bad choices can influence an entire life
- Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance and managing a bank account To what extent do you agree or disagree Many feel that students today should learn practical skills at school such as car maintenance 78
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individuals and teams is the reason for most sports achievements Others however think that mental attitude is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Junk food advertising has a harmful effect on society and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 95
- In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum Nowadays information is freely available on internet therefore is no longer need for museum To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, while, after all, i think, in conclusion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 477.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76100628931 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60452967751 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7592159518 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7391304348 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7391304348 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316462718802 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847943061088 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482353726383 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196064814429 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210874425779 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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