The number of homeless people has become more in recent times in many countries. It is considered as one of the primary phenomenon in majority of societies around the world. Despite some individuals believe that giving money is the best way to assist them, I strongly argue that educating them and providing affordable houses will be more beneficial to help them.
On the one hand, giving money to homeless people is thought the most effective way to assist them;however it is a temporary solution hense it will not solve it completely. They can hire a room or rent a house for a few months but more realistic steps must be taken to get permenant results.
On the other hand, goverments can take countless steps to resolve it. Providing free education will be an effective solution. They can land jobs and get living wages to pay rents and bills after they complete it successfully. They will be able to gain certain qualifications which enable themhave vocations with wages that is enough to survive. For example, a study by Goverment of Can in 2018 revealed that the rate of homeless people had decreased to 2% after free trade-hand-on trainings were introduced there. Further and more importantly, availability of less affluent accommodations is vitally important to decrease this rate. If price of skycrapers and condos cost an arm and a leg, many people who get only living wage will not be able to afford them. For instance, a report by Toro Times in 2017 reported that the most expensive housing is in Toro hence the maximum number of homeless people 9% is there. If officials had given incentives to persuade construction companies build less affluent residential buildings, there would have been fewer people living outside.
By way of conclusion, I completely believe that providing affordable accommodation and free education are essential to assist citizens in owning home although many people argue that giving some amount of money is one of the best way to deal this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 901, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce the maximum number of homeless people 9% is there. If officials had given ince...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98502994012 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80724828004 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4947081936 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236192347785 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716340976419 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911717938544 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175149296412 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781126404743 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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