News form an integral part of any nation and it's residents. Therefore, an integral part of journalism is to present the news stories in a detailed and lucid way. Thereby, news presenters use pictures and other graphics while devising any news content. In my opinion, using graphic content is a healthy practice which is employed by print and TV media.
To embark upon, as the saying goes that "a picture can say a thousand words" and is an effective tool in presenting facts in a short span of time. Since the time slot and paper space is limited when it comes to TV and print media respectively, therefore the news people try to cover as much as they can by using images. Moreover, another advantage of pictures is that the reader can easily understand the content of the news.
On the contrary, there are some drawbacks of using pictures as well. Firstly, a key aspect of journalism is that the reader should draw a conclusion and give a perspective to every news item. This can only be managed if the news content is presented with words trying to do the same and help the reader altogether whereas pictures normally fail to do so. Secondly, very young people who are novice when it comes to comprehending the language can form an unintended meaning of the news by merely looking at the pictures. As a result, this can affect their mental state in a negative way.
To recapitulate, utmost rationale should be taken by news agencies while forming the news because excessive use of images will hamper the goals of relevancy and correctness of any news story.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and print media respectively, therefore the news people try to cover as much as ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ult, this can affect their mental state in a negative way. To recapitulate, utmost rationale s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74181818182 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61877770997 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1251104106 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188404328119 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674586954056 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234804872183 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111810495897 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272851886111 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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