Children are the tender buds of the society they need to be taught moral values and strength of the life. Few of them argued that spending time in technology in terms of fun and entertainment are profitable whereas other say that it can directly impact on offspring mental strength. I firmly agree with the writer notion and explain that why I subscribe to the latter view, in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, There are is mainly one prominent reason behind this issue. Whenever kid spend numerous amount of time with the latest technology then they can suffer from various health hurdles either in the form of physically or mentally. Since of modern attraction of the highly 4k video games and different types of shows in television which bring the children more enjoyable, it ultimately effect to their study schedule and bring lower grades in their primary schools. For instance, considering china as an example, in that state mostly children got the treatment of mental level because of the interesting game is known as PUBG.
To persist with, despite spending time together with their parents, by passing the time they can also get far away from their guidance and lost the connection of love from them. In this present scenario, millions of technology updating day by day and if the new technology or game occur in the market then the pressure of purchasing will comes by the children and that leads to bad impact on their life; consequently, it is unclear to say that entertainment features can bring children benefit. For example, the correlation between parents and kids love have been deteriorate.
In recapitulation, although children can spend their quality of time in fun zone in various way, the limit of the certain thing should have to adhere other wish varied hindrance may have to face.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...et then the pressure of purchasing will comes by the children and that leads to bad i...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
...between parents and kids love have been deteriorate. In recapitulation, although childre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95751633987 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6077796608 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584967320261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1230521671 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.909090909 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903353953774 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347377126404 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288126493216 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534579943078 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028661259993 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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