In recent years, international tourism has gained significant attention as the most important industry in the world however there are positive and negative comments against this type of business. Some believe that travelling between different nations causes harsh tension instead of understanding each other and many people have an opposite opinion. In my mind and because of following reasons I disagree with the statement that says tourism industry creates tension between persons from various cultures.
First of all, being in tourism business requires to know various languages to be a prosperous employee and Knowledge of language as a communication tool is a crucial factor. Hence this type of industry helps people to figure out their disparate values and traditions by understanding sentences and words. For example a Turkish tour guide in a hotel should know English to do his or her duties in a proper way and this routes to reading books, music and history of English people.
Secondly, international tourism as a professional job in many countries teaches everybody the hosting skills in order to market their society to the universe. Hence, when a tourist sees a warm and hospitable environment in a journey this is a starting point to like the related history and civilization in lieu of having a strange hostile sense about that land. For example, there are some countries in the world that have negative relationship in politic with each other and a child who grows up in these regions does not delightful feeling but seeing the country with its caring and smiling people improves the vision between them.
In conclusion, meeting people from different races including diverse colors and languages has a great impact in universal friendship as a means for decreasing challenges among generations and overall worldwide tourism is a wise choice for this belief.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23178807947 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8085014447 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5083521205 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308708324595 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106686177257 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701123229877 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169798019596 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108539616625 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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