Nowadays the most important task is the environmental protection of our planet for future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Environment pollution has destroyed the life of many individuals in the world. Protection of the planet for future generation has become the main motive of every country these days. This essay will argue why safeguarding the environment is entirely necessary for upcoming generation.
Its true, protecting the environment is the main issue in today's world. It has cost the life of many people and animals from many years. More and more diseases are widely getting spread due to climate change. In recent study, glaciers are getting melted in Antarctic due to global warming resulting in weather change and seasonal changes in whole world. It has resulted in drastic change in today's world which will effect the health of future generation.
However, various measures and investment have been done by the government to protect the government. Many Non government organisations are getting in touch with people by creating awareness among them and plant more and more trees to safeguard the environment. Additionally, forest cutting has been banned in many places to protect the trees. Moreover, campaigning is done in all over world to convince people to plant more trees. Machines are been manufactured to re-use the waste material like woods, paper, plastic etc. Many steps are been taken by the government to safe the environment from many problems.
In my opinion, steps are been taken to secure the environment but they are not enough. Countries should come together to take part in this problem and give suggestions. Various summit are been done world wide for the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25177304965 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73006582217 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556737588652 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4337442438 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9473684211 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36842105263 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266329320476 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876842292212 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172980899103 0.0667982634062 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249026273957 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.377221754061 0.056905535591 663% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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