According to the research and statistics, recent days most of the people are not doing the necessity of work on their own. As a result, people have not been enthusiastic and healthy. Comparatively olden days, the story claimed that everybody who was living in the countryside had been doing any chores on their own. So it had made them healthy and proactively concentrate on their work. This essay describes the implications of being not healthy and active as well as giving possible solutions.
To start with, people living in the metropolitan area are so busy and occupy themselves for any reason. The reason could be the way they are living, the work which they are doing, stress and financial crisis. Apparently, this makes them not following healthy habits such as eat on time, minimize the sugar content as well as adding up high protein products. For instance, according to the survey unveiled by Health and Management, 92.5% of people are having heart disease and most significantly the ratio of the people who are staying in a town is having higher.
On the other hand, in order to overcome this situation, people have to make rules themselves to be healthy and follow some habits which could make them energetic. Firstly, people should organize their diet plan such as how many calories to be burned in a day and the consumption of foods. Furthermore, most fitness organization suggests and emphasize the people to do exercise regularly. This builds them more confident and comfortable in daily life. To exemplify, the research and development of the fitness administrator denote, people who are following healthy habits are so pleasant and harmony than others.
To sum up, the repercussions of unhealthy and possible solutions to overcome this cause, now most of the people not doing their basic chores because the life which they have been living is so busy. As a consequence, people come over many health issues physically and mentally. So, I suggest everyone has to follow at least 20 or 30 minutes in a day to focus on your workout or yoga or anything which is suitable for your body strength and make you comfortable. Be healthy and stay active.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Comparatively,
...have not been enthusiastic and healthy. Comparatively olden days, the story claimed that ever...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are staying in a town is having higher. On the other hand, in order to overcome ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, as to, at least, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93169398907 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71670583775 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5632144989 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.277777778 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38888888889 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196029821284 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639607875031 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462677675074 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124251041846 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250420090835 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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