Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
You should write at least 250 words
The nutritional value of fast foods has been a controversial topic since almost a decade now. Due to the hectic lifestyle prevalent in urban cities, availability of these foods is on a rise and so is their consumption. However, despite being tasty and easy to prepare, their ill effects on health and cognitive development makes them an undesirable choice.
Firstly, the ingredients used to prepare fast food are not all natural and have taste enhancers which addict the consumers . Therefore, over-eating leads to lasting health issues. For example, an article in "Health is Wealth" 2017 edition, stated that Burgers are made of a special flour that takes about two days to digest and often causing bloating and stomach ulcers, which are extremely painful and have lasting impact on the person's health. Due to lack of time or energy to cook a healthy meal, many families find it easier to buy readily available food from the outside to satisfy their hunger.
Secondly, consumption of too many fast foods disrupts the cognitive development of growing children as they are denied of important nutrients which are crucial for the growth of the brain cells. Such kids become lethargic not just physically but also mentally as they find it difficult to concentrate and lack interest in learning and developing themselves. For instance, a recent newspaper article on child development published an astonishing scientific research conducted by comparing the mental development of a group of children who were given only fast food for an entire week as against another group who consumed only fresh vegetables and healthier foods. The results proved that no new brain cells were formed in children consuming only fast food during the week. Therefore, it would be right to say An entire generation will be affected if the food preferences are not changed.
To conclude, the essay highlighted how despite having better taste and taking less preparation time, regular consumption of fast food has dangerous health-hazards and lasting impact on the mental development of children and therefore must be consumed judiciously.
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26764705882 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84596815648 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608823529412 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2040998626 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.769230769 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984739428369 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390409844772 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307938984365 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635250231867 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00528051799233 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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