Garbage is now increasing to greater extent. Waste management techniques are not effectively followed in few countries. There is several reason for this failure and necessary actions to be followed.
Most importantly, India has not grown in terms of their farm vegetable or fruits production. Instead we are rising to one of those to be called as “unclean country”. Further, if people follow this lifestyle for many years, thousands of tonnes of garbage would be assimilated occupying our living space and cause health hazards. Also, people should change their mind set of throwing away in public places instead they should litter them in dustbins or recycle bins. Moreover, scientists have found garbage such as plastics and paper are found in deep soil unaffected even after 30 years. Apparently, this affects our environment as pollution and rain water is not getting penetrated deeper into soil.
On contrary, every people should follow 3R’s namely Reduce, Reuse and Recycle when they are collecting their garbage at home. Consequently, this would be effective method to reuse them as manure or fertilizer to plants. In Countries like Singapore, Japan, Wastes are collected by government and thrown away to common place and they are lit fire. Finally, those perishable wastes are then dropped in sea. So those countries are still renowned for their cleanliness. Nevertheless, government should effectively follow similar approach in India. In the same context, government should make every individual responsible for their action by implementing swach bharath mission or conducting camps frequently to bring awareness.
In conclusion, there was self discipline when we were in Individual homes by using wastes as manure for Plants. Now, we are slowly forgetting our culture and methods of reducing wastes and recycling them effectively. We should reduce waste by separating them as perishable waste and reusable waste as Manure.
- Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed.What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development? 67
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced. 11
- You have recently started work in a new company.•explain why you changed jobs•describe your new job•tell him/her your other news 73
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced. 11
- Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both the views, give your own opinion and include examples from your experience. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ly followed in few countries. There is several reason for this failure and necessary actions ...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ir farm vegetable or fruits production. Instead we are rising to one of those to be cal...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, consequently, finally, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47350993377 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84967010541 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1085118661 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0584972076496 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190774602912 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.018374645435 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0375150583587 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160214434137 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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