An urgent problem around the world is the huge production of garbage that our economic model generate day by day. In order to tackle this issue, it is important to identify the causes.
Nowadays, our consumption habits are the main factor of the uncontrolled production of rubbish around the world. The fashion of “use and throw” is the dominant tendency in the current global economy. For instance, more than 60% of families in USA discard they appliances like TVs, computers, tablets and smartphone after six months of usage, causing a direct increase of electronic garbage, that is a growing problem currently. In short, the are not awareness in society about the future consequences of these wastes in our environment.
On the other hand, our economy have an excessive utilization of plastic and that generate uncontrolled volume of wastes. In daily life, plastic is in everywhere, covering vegetables, clothes, and bread. There are not a public attention about how we do an excessive use of it For example, latest scientific research warn about the high levels of plastic in oceans and how that is menacing sea-life. Thus, the current plastic problem is not a worldwide concern because, despite there a lot of campaigns on mass media, people is still using plastic everyday without relevant behaviour changes.
In order to deal with this problem, governments have an important role to regulate the massive production of garbage through restrictive laws to industry. Additionally, it is primordial to run campaigns in schools and public spaces to aware people about the importance of recycling and reduce the use of plastics.
To conclude, the “use and throw” culture is the main cause of our excessive production of rubbish. Measures like obliged recycling and a well conducted education among people could be an important beginning to deal with this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
An urgent problem around the world is th...
^^
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... a growing problem currently. In short, the are not awareness in society about the futu...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...we do an excessive use of it For example, latest scientific research warn about the high...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ss media, people is still using plastic everyday without relevant behaviour changes. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay without relevant behaviour changes. In order to deal with this problem, gove...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27722772277 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8643138265 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2438165863 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687185784195 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212298567096 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204397665043 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364656684847 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104193642613 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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