Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
it is true, today, the world population are steady increasing, especially in metropolitans, go along with this the rubbish are also growing together.
there are number of reasons why the rubbish has been increase producing by us recently, the first reason is the human needs, in fact, today the human has more a lot of needs than before, let says about carry container which used to use today to carry any kind of things, for example, the households goes to market to buy something, few years ago, they would bring along with them something to carry as a basket but nowadays the nylon bags would be replaced for all of that, each thing you bought was packed in each nylon bag so that if you buy more things you would more nylon bags which are became rubbish after that.
The second reason is waste industry from the factory, there are many factories are building around the world, especially in a developing countries, these factories beside the function to produce variance of products to serve for human needs but it also produces a lot of wastes and it would be eliminated to our enviroment.
In conclusion, With the first reason, in my opinion, we should appeals people to stop use the nylon bags through any kind of media, giving the information that it very harmful for our enviroment if we keeps using this, beside that we also organise some groups to release a leaflets with appealing to protect our earth at the local markets, and the second reason the state should be strictly supervise their wasting activities, should have weight punishment for any violate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is true, today, the world population ar...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... rubbish are also growing together. there are number of reasons why the rubbish h...
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Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ngs you would more nylon bags which are became rubbish after that. The second reas...
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Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'appeal'
Suggestion: appeal
... first reason, in my opinion, we should appeals people to stop use the nylon bags throu...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'keep'
Suggestion: keep
...t very harmful for our enviroment if we keeps using this, beside that we also organis...
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Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a leaflet' or simply 'leaflets'?
Suggestion: a leaflet; leaflets
...we also organise some groups to release a leaflets with appealing to protect our earth at ...
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Line 7, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have weight punishment for any violate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79120879121 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44390158142 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.241750163 49.4020404114 353% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 327.0 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.25 20.7667163134 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.25 7.06120827912 372% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157954487169 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856638238368 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453954569448 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856638238368 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453954569448 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.69 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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