The number of people at risk of serious health problem due to overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?
What can be done to solve the issue?
It is often argued that serious diseases like high blood pressure, obesity among the young people due to high body weight.There is a myriad reason for this issue. I will discuss some of them in this essay.
It is a bitter truth that society is facing crucial health-related issues because of the unhealthy lifestyle, missing the ample physical activities and diet in daily routine. Nowadays, the pace of life is very fast so people do not have enough time to cook food and dependent on the fast food most of the time. Additionally, physical movement in daily life is almost disappeared after booming technology revolution. For instant, A statistic of the recently conducted research indicate that 60 percent people in developed country suffering heart related problem due to their sedentary life style.By this way people is inviting the diseases which can not be easily cured.
However, people can avoid this deplorable condition by taking some measuring steps in their daily lifestyle. Physical exercise is the best solution to keep away diseases related to overweight. For instant, a research indicated that if you spent 20 minutes only for exercise daily then you can save yourself by almost all the major diseases. Moreover healthy diet can help a lot. People should take the green vegetables and fruits as much as possible and be away from the fried and heavy calorie foods.
In conclusion, It is always fruitful thought to be healthy and fit and avoid the unnecessary stress of the physical problems. I believe that a regular habit and some healthy measure can be help in this and it will be make you wealthy eventually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99267399267 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63345762999 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9686518695 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218405455767 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646324945803 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454082906871 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118978841739 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327016994839 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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