In this technical era, pace of life is increasing due to which physical activity has declined. It is resulting into serious health issues like obesity. Here, reasons behind this growth of over weight society will be scrutinised along with solutions to this problem.
Admittedly, contemporary world has made people lethargic and sedentary, they are habitual of living with all comforts. This is resulting into reduced sports activities, to illustrate, juveniles now play online games, these modern gizmos have confined them to four wall. Thus, due to lack of activity individuals are turning obese. Moreover, their eating habbits are also responsible for this overweighted community. Most of the parents are working, they don't have time to cook food, so ultimately they are left with only one choice that is adult rated food such as, canned food, instant noodles and junk food. Hence, change in eating habbits from past is major factor for obesity.
However, solution to this can be by government, as they can make masses aware of hazardous repercussion of overweight. They can launch some initiatives like health summits, check up campaigns and programs on TV to promote healthy life style. They can improve infrastructure such as parks, sports stadium and gymnasium. Furthermore, people should also be accountable towards it. They should keep check on their food, and do regular exercise. Guardians should encourage their children to take part in sports, which will make them more active and fit.
In conclusion, this problem can be dangerous for healthy so these solutions should be implemented by cooperation and coleboration between authorities and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38167938931 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75304896375 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3100158198 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281098877598 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852776658851 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809035637701 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184233449269 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595096374204 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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