It is true that the modern life push us to spend most of time on work. People, nowadays, is lacking in physical strength and health compare to the past. As a consequence that could lead to a permanent issues in body healthy. This essay will looking at the cause of it and suggests some measures can address it.
On the one hand, living in the rapid modern world that people is struggling in survival. They are spending most of time in order to earn a standard living. They tend to chill at home rather to do more exercises after a long day of work. In addition to the pressures from work is another issues impacted their mantel health and this can lead to a long-term physical health. This phenomenon happened because they have no time to relax and train their body. Moreover, working environment is different, most people were working on physical job in the past, such as farmer, compare to recently that the machine did a lots of jobs for human. Therefore, people in this generation have lack of opportunity to exercise their body.
However, there are some performances can achieve by both individuals and governments. Governments can introduce a new police for working force, such as reducing the working hours and encouraging the companies to provide more sort of activities in working place. This can help employees have opportunities to exercise themselves during the work and reduce the pressure from the activity. Moreover, individual conscious is a key point to push them willing to take care of their health, so they can spend time on training their body by themselves.
In conclusion, although there are several issues had impacted our long-term health, but I believe there are some solutions can be achieve by government and individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...trength and health compare to the past. As a consequence that could lead to a perm...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
...issues in body healthy. This essay will looking at the cause of it and suggests some me...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ompare to recently that the machine did a lots of works for human. Therefore, they hav...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... governments. Governments can introduce a new polices for working force, such as redu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88513513514 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66664288856 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.707979519 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130811869956 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419945449703 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342706572299 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784614919883 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249485428664 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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