Nowadays, people are not only shopping in malls but they are also shopping online from eCommerce sites such as amazon.com, taobao.com, etc. There is a debate that whether people’s shopping habits relied more on the age classification or not. I believe there are different factors, which influence shopping habits rather than the age group and this essay will argue this opinion.
On the one hand, the age group potentially affects how frequent people go shopping. There is a fact that when people become more mature, they will have more connections. According to the report from Adidas, the age group of people from 30 years olds to 45 years old that has the most connection comparing to other group and this group is most addicted to shopping. This example supported the argument that the age group classifies shopping habits.
Despite the age cluster is one of the factors affecting shopping habits, there are several factors giving more influence to the shopping activity of people. The first important reason, which affects directly the frequency of shopping, is income. Obviously, residents cannot buy cloth, groceries, and other kinds of stuff without money. The second reason affecting shopping behavior is gender. It is easy to see a great deal of people who usually go to malls for shopping is female. To support this, the study of Nike presented that about 70% of people who usually visit shopping malls are female. These examples strongly supported the opinion that there are different reasons that contribute to the shopping frequency of people rather than the age group.
This essay argued why the age group is not considered as the main factor that affects the shopping habits of people. In my opinion, I totally agree with this argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52178380895 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520689655172 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.915562026 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343504908176 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11826019074 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681536532747 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222324139225 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382046378163 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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